Awesome work, really well done!
Obviously a big part of this piece is the fabrics, so I’ll give you some feedback there
The pants kind of feel like heavy canvas pants, and therefore they don’t have as many natural folds as what you would see in denim. Maybe that’s just personal preference. They feel a little straight because of it and not a lot of breakup.
Maybe they could benefit from being a little bigger to give you some more folds?
A similar pose with jeans
The jacket on the other hand feels very natural, nice folds and good weight to it.
I sometimes use pins to cheat the folds I want 😀
I think it’s a shame that you have such a high detail level in the cap of all things, but the jacket is still very clean, no fabric detail
And for a guy his age, I do kind of feel the pose is a little out of place. Very feminine and more youthful, that could just be me though 😀
But overall, really solid work! Some tweaks that could be done to elevate it, but really nice 🙂
Can’t wait to see what else you create!